I must weave in, out, around, and through
traffic but within the hour after white-knuckling my way up the Grapevine the
smile returns as I take exit 205 Frazier Mountain Park Rd., we’re almost there.
Nice work, Jordan! Your verb "weave" is great, but cut the excess and just write "I must weave the traffic." The verb "weave" already implies all that movement.
Nice work, Jordan! Your verb "weave" is great, but cut the excess and just write "I must weave the traffic." The verb "weave" already implies all that movement.
ReplyDeleteUse a colon after "Rd."
"'weave' already implies all that movement." Makes sense.
Deleteand thank you for the punctuation correction.
thanks for the help!!